ozarque ([info]ozarque) wrote,
@ 2007-11-20 09:59:00
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Eldering; poem; "Sycamore"
Sycamore

That fine high sycamore near my front door ...
I knew that tree before it was a tree.
I grew it from a seed,
to shade our house in summer.
You step beneath that tree on a hot day --
even a hot day without a breeze --
the air is cooler there by ten degrees,
or more.

Before,
when both the sycamore and I were younger,
every year I trimmed that tree for Christmas
with ornaments that could bear the snow and rain,
and topped it with a star.
Till it outgrew me,
so very far that even on a ladder
I was too small,
it was too tall.

That sycamore glows white in wintertime,
even at night. And now it grows
its own array of small round sturdy ornaments,
all of them able to bear the snow and rain,
all of them the color of ripe persimmons.
Now it winds itself with bittersweet garlands,
decked with shining redbird-colored berries.

Decorating its own tall self outside,
with no help from me,
it reaches up toward yet another star
I'm far too small to provide.


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off topic: one laptop per child
[info]mtz322
2007-11-20 04:21 pm UTC (link)
Just wondering what you thought about the one laptop per child program. http://www.laptopgiving.org/en/index.php

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Re: off topic: one laptop per child... response to mtz322...
[info]ozarque
2007-11-20 04:43 pm UTC (link)
I'm all for it. But I'm sorry they weren't able to reach the goal they started out with, which was for the laptops to cost only $100.00 each.

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Re: off topic: one laptop per child... response to mtz322...
[info]momomom
2007-11-20 05:41 pm UTC (link)
I've heard they are heading that way still. I just did the buy one / give one promotion for $400. I'm looking forward to playing with the little kermit that I recieve before passing it on.

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[info]davidwilford
2007-11-20 04:31 pm UTC (link)
I'm reminded of the sycamore tree in the back yard of the house I grew up in. Thank you for your lovely poem.

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Response to davidwilford...
[info]ozarque
2007-11-20 04:44 pm UTC (link)
And thank you in return, for your comment and the encouraging words.

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[info]mixophrygian
2007-11-20 05:33 pm UTC (link)
There's nothing quite like the satisfaction of growing a plant to independence. Lovely poem, it gave me chills :)

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Response to mixophrygian...
[info]ozarque
2007-11-20 07:41 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. My husband tried to talk me out of growing that sycamore; he insisted that it wasn't possible to grow a sycamore from seed. He was wrong.

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Re: Response to mixophrygian...
[info]dichroic
2007-11-21 02:05 am UTC (link)
I am not entirely crazy about Thrones, Dominations, Jill paton Walsh's sequel to Sayers' Lor peter Wimsey novels. But it does have a lovely bit in which Lord Peter's older brother Gerald, the Duke of Denver, when faced with the darkening of the future in about 1938 and his fears of the Denver estate being broken up after his own death, responds with a vote of hope ... by planting oaks.

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Wimsey's oaks
[info]houseboatonstyx
2007-11-22 12:36 am UTC (link)
Oh, is THAT what that was about! I knew it meant something, and it was handled beautifully.

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Re: Wimsey's oaks
[info]dichroic
2007-11-22 01:18 am UTC (link)
Well, that's what *I* think it was about, anyhow.

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re: vote of hope
[info]labelleizzy
2007-11-22 01:06 am UTC (link)
Went to dinner last night at Greens in San Francisco. the Long Now foundation has an office next door, and a quote on the wall described how Oxford University's dining hall was rebuilt, a few years back (in this century I believe) by oaks planted in the 1300's by the far-seeing architect who knew that, in 6 or 700 years, the hall would need oak beams when it would be rebuilt.

I loved that quote.

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[info]houseboatonstyx
2007-11-22 12:37 am UTC (link)
Me too.

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[info]momomom
2007-11-20 05:40 pm UTC (link)
That is so lovely!

I've always been leary for some reason about planting trees, despite being an accomplished gardener of flowers and herbs. I can never visualize the end result.

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Response to momomom....
[info]ozarque
2007-11-20 07:44 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. I love planting trees, and for years I had a mini-nursery here specializing in miniature trees. [Not bonsai -- no root-pruning; just miniature trees in pots.] But sycamores are an exception to the general rule that if you want to see a tree full-size and full grown you need to plant it when you're a small child. Sycamores grow very fast.

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[info]naamah_darling
2007-11-20 06:08 pm UTC (link)
I'm in the habit of reading poems aloud, and this one reads beautifully. Thank you. It makes me remember . . . better times, and beloved trees.

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Response to naamah_darling...
[info]ozarque
2007-11-20 07:45 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. I'm glad it brings you good memories.

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[info]labelleizzy
2007-11-20 06:16 pm UTC (link)
oh, *applause*

wonderful, wistful, remembering, heart-piercing.

thank you for sharing.

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Response to labelleizzy...
[info]ozarque
2007-11-20 07:46 pm UTC (link)
Many thanks to you in return...

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(Anonymous)
2007-11-20 06:35 pm UTC (link)
Yes. Thank you. Tears in my eyes. Life goes on.

Meg Umans

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Response to Meg Umans...
[info]ozarque
2007-11-20 07:47 pm UTC (link)
You're welcome, Meg, and thank you in return.

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Beautiful!
[info]ysabetwordsmith
2007-11-20 06:43 pm UTC (link)
Oooo, this is beautiful. There are trees in my yard, now young adults, that I helped my parents plant when I was very young. I remember watching them outgrow me. Pines and spruces in the Midwinter Grove, an oak and maples elsewhere -- they're a good 30 or 40 feet tall now, at least. The crabapple and pear in the orchard are middle-aged now; fruit trees don't last as long as hardwoods like oak. The trees I planted a few years ago are starting to bloom and bear fruit. Someday when I have children, they'll grow up in a subtly different yard than I did.

I love counting the human lifespan by measuring it against trees. It gives both a sense of accomplishment and a sense of humbleness.

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Re: Beautiful! Response to ysabetwordsmith...
[info]ozarque
2007-11-20 07:48 pm UTC (link)
Thank you...

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[info]dteleki
2007-11-20 11:52 pm UTC (link)
That was lovely! I especially liked the last two lines.

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Response to dteleki...
[info]ozarque
2007-11-21 01:28 pm UTC (link)
Thank you...

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[info]filkferengi
2007-11-24 03:04 am UTC (link)
This poem reminds me of the first time I read _Heidi_ as a child, when she hears the great rushing wind & goes outside to dance with the pine trees.

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