ozarque ([info]ozarque) wrote,
@ 2005-12-16 14:00:00
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Religious language; poem; "Canticle Of The Animals"
Canticle Of The Animals

What does the owl say to me,
as it watches?
The owl says:
"Daughter,
your wings are folded under your breastbone;
Daughter, your wings are hidden.
If you do not feel them try to move,
you are not paying attention."
Blessed be the wary owl for the lessons it teaches.

What does the fish say to me,
as it flickers?
The fish says:
"Daughter,
you had gills when you were in the womb;
Daughter, you come from the water.
If you no longer remember how to swim,
you are not paying attention."
Blessed be the slender fish for the lessons it teaches.

What does the cow say to me,
as it stands?
The cow says:
"Daughter,
I make food from the grasses;
Daughter, you and I are makers of food.
If you cannot perceive how beautiful we are,
you are not paying attention."
Blessed be the broad cow for the lessons it teaches.

What does the dog say to me,
as it waits?
The dog says:
"Daughter,
there is wilderness in you;
Daughter, your body's skin covers tangled thickets.
If you cannot smell them on the wind,
you are not paying attention."
Blessed be the steadfast dog for the lessons it teaches.

What does the lizard say to me,
as it leaves?
The lizard says:
"Daughter,
you know how to live in a desert;
Daughter, you know where the drops of water are.
If you have lost the track of your own wisdom,
you are not paying attention."
Blessed be the quick lizard for the lessons it teaches.

...

What does the tiger say to me,
as it lies curled?
The tiger says:
"Daughter,
you do not run your kill to ground;
Daughter, your kill comes cut and wrapped and packaged.
If you have forgotten that all life kills to eat,
you are not paying attention."
Blessed be the fierce tiger for the lessons it teaches.

What does the snake say to me,
as it slides by?
The snake says:
"Daughter,
if you hoard poison, it will multiply:
Daughter, never turn your hand to venom.
If you have not noticed that my forked tongue speaks truth,
you are not paying attention."
Blessed be the shining snake for the lessons it teaches.

What does the beetle say to me,
as it scuttles?
The beetle says:
"Daughter,
I remind you to tend to the small things;
Daughter, power is not only the property of the large.
If you cannot see me from the corner of your eye,
you are not paying attention."
Blessed be the antlered beetle for the lessons it teaches.

What does the spider say to me,
as it weaves?
The spider says:
"Daughter,
your fingers are skillful;
Daughter, you know how the web shines in the light.
If you feel that there's nothing left to spin with,
you are not paying attention."
Blessed be the busy spider for the lessons it teaches.

What does the heron say to me,
as it wades?
The heron says:
"Daughter,
notice my elegant bent wing;
Daughter, I would have you join me in my dance.
If you and I dance together, we will dance glory,
and we will pay attention."
Blessed be the tall heron for the lessons it teaches.

What do all the animals say to me,
as they go about in the world?
The animals say:
"Daughter,
you have us for holy book;
we move by our principles, in the innocence of our time.
You will learn from us,
if you pay attention."
Blessed be all the beloved animals,
for the lessons they teach.


Note:

This poem, in a just slightly different version, was first published at the back of Native Tongue III:Earthsong.


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[info]rosefox
2005-12-16 02:13 pm UTC (link)
That's really beautiful.

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[info]dpolicar
2005-12-16 02:28 pm UTC (link)
This is lovely.

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[info]jdulac
2005-12-16 02:34 pm UTC (link)
I am unaccountably shedding tears... I guess religious experiences have a way of doing that.

thank you.

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[info]frankie_ecap
2005-12-16 02:35 pm UTC (link)
This is wonderful.

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[info]dcseain
2005-12-16 04:18 pm UTC (link)
How very lovely. :) Thank you.

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This should be posted at the entrances of every zoo in the US
[info]dakiwiboid
2005-12-16 04:48 pm UTC (link)
I have often wanted to put up a sign at our own zoo saying:
These animals are not your servants or your toys, they are your teachers. Learn from them.

You have said it so much better.

Thank you so much!

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[info]saavik
2005-12-16 05:40 pm UTC (link)
Suzette,
If you were a Christian Minister, I would come to church just to hear your sermons and your prayers. This poem is both those things and very beautiful.
Thank you.

Margo (Eclectic Neo-Pagan Universal Unitarian Panentheist. In other words - still seeking.)

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[info]desert_born
2005-12-16 09:39 pm UTC (link)
<-- what she said.

heck, even if you were some other kind of minister, i would still come to hear your words. i really appreciate good writing, and that was a fine example.

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[info]jehannamama
2005-12-16 05:40 pm UTC (link)
Oh that touches me so deeply... thank you for those words.

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[info]lyonesse
2005-12-16 06:07 pm UTC (link)
that's just gorgeous. thank you :)

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[info]atheilen
2005-12-16 07:26 pm UTC (link)
This is beautiful. Thank you. *memories*

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[info]naamah_darling
2005-12-16 08:31 pm UTC (link)
Thank you.

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[info]teal_cuttlefish
2005-12-16 09:39 pm UTC (link)
Thank you. I'm pointing my friends to this; you may see a small uptick in your friends list.

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[info]singingnettle
2005-12-16 10:40 pm UTC (link)
I read this (or the other version of it, anyway) in Earthsong and adored it the first time I read it. Given that my friends refer to me as "the squirrel whisperer," that's not surprising.


Oh, just realized this is your journal and not that of the friend who pointed to it...Hello; we have several friends in common, and I recommend your writing to people all the time when they ask me for literate, thoughtful, unconventional science fiction.

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[info]londonbard
2005-12-16 11:21 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, that is beautiful.

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[info]joycemelton
2005-12-17 06:15 am UTC (link)
Beautiful words and thoughts, thank you.

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[info]ab_xnfp
2005-12-17 06:58 am UTC (link)
Thank you.

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[info]ozarque
2005-12-17 01:56 pm UTC (link)
My thanks to all of you for the comments and encouraging words; they're very much appreciated.

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[info]samildanach
2005-12-18 08:40 pm UTC (link)
Thank you.

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[info]lilithschild
2005-12-19 02:01 pm UTC (link)
Very Nice!

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[info]filkferengi
2005-12-20 05:23 pm UTC (link)
Now I'm hearing a chorus-line of filkers, each one soloing on a different verse & all harmonizing on the "paying attention" lines.

Thank you for the lovely visions & sounds!

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tune...
[info]ozarque
2005-12-20 05:56 pm UTC (link)
You're most welcome, and thank you for the comment. Do you have a tune for this in mind? [Other than the all-purpose "Gilligan's Island" one?]

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Re: tune...
[info]filkferengi
2005-12-21 03:36 am UTC (link)
I'm not getting a tune per se, but wouldn't it make a lovely holiday pageant, done as a recitative?

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